This is awesome! You did a great job of Deryn especially--it's really hard to make her look like a girl trying to look like a boy but still kind of slightly femininish (the balance is hard to get I guess )--so good job!
Wow... just... Awesomesauce... I'd give you a thumbs up, but then I'd have to give you another, and another, and another... but then again I don't have enough thumbs... So all I'll say is, so I don't overdo it... Barking spiders! That's BRILLIANT!